Six Sentence Sunday!



These six are from my newly contracted novel,

CORRALLING THE CITY GIRL (Ride 'em Hard, #2)

Coming Soon to Siren Publishing!


"Ten thousand dollars is a lot of money in this day and age. I figure you could buy yourself plenty of clean jeans with that. Maybe some shaving cream and razors, too."

He bit his lip and the retort begging to blurt out. Rather, he spoke slow and controlled. "Does my appearance bother you, Ms. Williams?"


Comments

romancingalix said…
Nice six, with a playful edge. Thank you.
Taryn Kincaid said…
Bet the way he looks sure does bother her!
Gem Sivad said…
I think we can be certain that he bothers her. ;) Sassy six!
Suzie Quint said…
LOL. Love the 'tude. Love when a writer makes me laugh in just six sentences.
Bree said…
Uh, oh. I can already feel the tension between these two!
Dee Carney said…
I kinda like the way he looks just from what's not been said here. Yummy!
Carrie Ann Ryan said…
I think I like the way he looks LOL!
Sandy Ruth said…
I wonder what retort he held back! There's a lot of tension in this dialogue and I like it.
lilashaw.com said…
Mmm, I like a man who needs a shave, especially one who can control his tongue but still get his point across.
Kathleen Grieve said…
Love how he controls himself! This is going to be very interesting as it plays out. Great dialogue!
Sandra Sookoo said…
Mmm, can't wait to see her response. :-)

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